Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the
students
of universities
has
become a topic of debate. While some people believe tertiary Change the verb form
have
education
is just reserved for talented young students
, the opposite is accepting students
without ages and marks. In this
essay, I am going to cite some justifiable reasons why universities
should be for everyone. Obviously, the reason of
tertiary Change preposition
for
education
need to receive young student
have high point. Firstly
, young students
can easily integrate in
many different academic environments, Change the preposition
into
with
having
several talented Correct word choice
and having
students
still increases the reputation of this
university. Knowledge of students
has a high mark which is huge therefore
studying becomes not difficult. Example
top Change preposition
For example
universities
usually maintain the quality of students
by recruiting excellent students
. In addition
, government
focus on Correct article usage
the government
Add an article
the high-marks
high-marks
Correct your spelling
high-mark
student
due to they would not waste of
Change preposition
apply
a
talent. It is more difficult to train a Remove the article
apply
student
who does not do well than to train a student
who does well, so hardly tertiary education
would like to accept good
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the good
a good
student
. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Furthermore
, college should be for all ages, even if they have no good results. The universities
accept everyone to express justice as well as nondiscrimination
. Correct your spelling
non-discrimination
Example
, in the past, our parents or our Change preposition
For example
grandma- grandpa
could not afford to go to tertiary Correct your spelling
grandma-grandpa
education
, now when they have more conditions, it is good for them to return studying
. Change preposition
to studying
Additionally
, high school student's
report cards are unable to express the potential of each Fix the agreement mistake
students'
student
. Due to each
province will have Change preposition
Each
the
different way of Correct article usage
a
education
so some small province
will have average higher scores than central provinces like HCM city or Can Tho. Fix the agreement mistake
provinces
Beside
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Besides
that
each person will have a different Add a comma
,that
fortle
, so it can not be judged on points. In conclusion, it is not advisable to admit Correct your spelling
force
forte
forty
students
through scores or ages
. Let everyone have a chance to study and expand Fix the agreement mistake
age
knowledge
.Correct pronoun usage
their knowledge
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite