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You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the customers who ordered your
service
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 to move my furniture. I am writing in the hope of a mutual agreement regarding the problem caused in the process of your
service
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.
To begin
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 with, I was moving to my new department
this
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 Tuesday and I booked the
service
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of
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furniture transport.
However
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, when I was checking these items when they arrived, I found there were some cracks on the screen of the television and one of the legs of my biggest cupboard were broken. I told these issues to the drivers and porters immediately.
Nevertheless
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, they claimed that the television and cupboard were in a broken state before they moved these from my old house and refused to compensate me. Frankly, I was so upset and disappointed for being treated in
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 a bad manner. I,
therefore
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, suggest that I would be given a full refund for the
service
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 charge.
In addition
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, I would
also
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 like to claim the losses of my broken electric devices and furniture. To be more specific, the value of these aforementioned subjects will be estimated and I will be appreciated
if
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it if
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 your company could repay me by cash or bank transfer according to the result of the estimation. If you have any
further
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 questions, please do not
hesitate
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tohesitate
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 contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Chalk Bin
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