You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see

Dear Sir/Madam,
This
humble piece of
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wishes to raise your attention
on
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some aspects of
airport
service
that I have faced
last
week. I am
afaraid
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afraid
but, I never expected
this
kind of
service
. My name is Misbaha and I had
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travelled
trvelled
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travelled
from
Bharain
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Bahrain
to IGI
Airport
Delhi India. My
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flight
filght
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flight
number was AI-239 that departed from Bahrain at 6 pm according to
indian
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time and landed there around 10:30 pm. In
fact
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it was
pleasant
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journey
however
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,
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regarding
reagarding
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regarding
the
airport
service
It made me
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sad.
Firstly
, I
had
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waited one hour for
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immigration
immgrigration
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immigration
clearance in
lone
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the lone
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queue. As
,
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my family was with me so, its was became
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to tack care
my
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children because they
were
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started crying. Even though, I requested from the
airport
staff that my children are feeling uncomfortable yet
on
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one turned to me. Once I reached to counter
then
I asked to officer
that
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that why only two counters are operating,
he
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and he
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replied
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me
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in
mannerless
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way that it is not non of
your
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business
bussiness
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business
subsquently
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subsequently
, I feel humiliated. I would to like emphasize that please some
amendement
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amendment
is really needed in terms of
service
and hospitality.
Firstly
,
Airport
staff must be polite as it reflects our
nation
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image on
international
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an international
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level.
Secondly
, there must several counters open to avoid any
unconviemnce
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unconvinced
of
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passenger
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along with some
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emergency
emgergncy
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emergency
service
if required.
Promt
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response is highly
appriciable
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appreciable
and I am looking forward to
hear
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from your side. Yours Sincerely Misbah Mzahir
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flight details
  • flight number
  • arrival time
  • departure time
  • baggage claim
  • customer service
  • long queues
  • staff attitude
  • improvement suggestions
  • enhanced training
  • clear signage
  • lost luggage
  • travel experience
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