You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see
Dear Sir/Madam,
This
humble piece of paper
wishes to raise your attention Add an article
a paper
on
some aspects of Change preposition
to
airport
service
that I have faced last
week. I am afaraid
but, I never expected Correct your spelling
afraid
this
kind of service
.
My name is Misbaha and I had Correct your spelling
travelled
trvelled
from Correct your spelling
travelled
Bharain
to IGI Correct your spelling
Bahrain
Airport
Delhi India. My Correct your spelling
flight
filght
number was AI-239 that departed from Bahrain at 6 pm according to Correct your spelling
flight
indian
time and landed there around 10:30 pm.
In Change the capitalization
Indian
fact
it was Add a comma
,fact
pleasant
journey Correct article usage
a pleasant
however
, Add the comma(s)
,however
Correct your spelling
regarding
reagarding
the Correct your spelling
regarding
airport
service
It made me bit
sad. Correct article usage
a bit
Firstly
, I had
waited one hour for Unnecessary verb
apply
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immigration
immgrigration
clearance in Correct your spelling
immigration
lone
queue. AsAdd an article
the lone
a lone
,
my family was with me so, its was became Remove the comma
apply
more harsh
to tack care Replace the words
harsher
my
children because they Change preposition
of my
were
started crying. Even though, I requested from the Unnecessary verb
apply
airport
staff that my children are feeling uncomfortable yet on
one turned to me.
Once I reached to counter Correct your spelling
no
then
I asked to officer that
that why only two counters are operating, Correct pronoun usage
apply
he
replied Correct word choice
and he
Change preposition
to me
me
in Correct pronoun usage
apply
mannerless
way that it is not non of Change the article
a mannerless
your
Correct pronoun usage
his
Correct your spelling
business
bussiness
Correct your spelling
business
subsquently
, I feel humiliated.
I would to like emphasize that please some Correct your spelling
subsequently
amendement
is really needed in terms of Correct your spelling
amendment
service
and hospitality. Firstly
,Airport
staff must be polite as it reflects our nation
image on Change noun form
nation's
international
level.
Add an article
an international
the international
Secondly
, there must several counters open to avoid any unconviemnce
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unconvinced
of
Change preposition
to
passenger
along with some Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
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emergency
emgergncy
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emergency
service
if required.
Promt
response is highly Correct your spelling
Prompt
appriciable
and I am looking forward to Correct your spelling
appreciable
hear
from your side.
Yours Sincerely
Misbah MzahirChange the verb form
hearing
Submitted by misbahamzahir8 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.