You travelled abroad and faced problems at airport. Write an letter to the airport manager and provide -your flight details -what is problem -suggest some improvements you want to see
Dear Sir/Madam,
This
humble piece of a
paper wishes to raise your attention to some aspects of Correct article usage
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airport
service
that I have faced last
week. I am afraid but,I never expected this
kind of assistance.
My name is Misbaha and I had
travelled from IGI Unnecessary verb
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Airport
Delhi to Dubai for family holidays.My flight number was AI-239 that
departed at 6 pm according to Indian time and landed there around 10:30 pm.
In fact, it was Correct pronoun usage
which
pleasant
journey,Add an article
a pleasant
however
regarding the airport
service
It made me a bit sad. To begin
, I waited one hour for immigration clearance in long
queue. As my family was with me so, its was became harsher to manage my children because they started crying. Even though, I requested from the Add an article
a long
the long
airport
staff that my children are feeling uncomfortable yet no one turned to me.
Once I reached to counter then
I asked to officer that
why only two counters are operating, and he replied to me in a mannerless way that it is not non of my business Correct word choice
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subsequently
,I feel humiliated.
I would to like emphasize that please some amendment is really needed in terms of service
and hospitality. Firstly
,Airport
staff must be polite as it reflects our nation’s image on an international level.
Secondly
, there must several counters open to avoid any inconvenience to passengers along with some emergency service
if required.
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response is highly appreciable and I am looking forward to Correct article usage
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hear
from your side.
Yours Sincerely
Misbah MzahirChange the verb form
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.