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In many countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction . What measures could be taken ro prevent this .

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There is a common belief that the industrial revolution causes environmental
pollution
.
Although
 economical improvements provide a lot of advantages to humanity, they are demolishing the ecosystem as a matter of fact. Scientists and policymakers collaborate to intercept deterioration that pollutes
by
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fabrics and companies. Everybody knows that in terms of humankind, clean breeze and clean
water
 are key features
hence
 people should be alarmed about the environment and endeavour to avert not only scarcity but
also
 decreasing quality of the atmosphere. It is a truth that some fabricates leave their trash which occurs by their manufacture to rivers, seas and so on so forth
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therefore
 government enforce the companies to create their own bins and
then
 build a system where the dirties of produce are collected. Aftermath, air protector filters should be constructed and used. Through these mechanisms,
pollution
 which takes place wittingly or unwittingly can be prevented.
For instance
, a manufacturing centre that has no filter and bin must be punished respectively with a fine and closed sanction. With these punishments, companies apply the rules and cannot cause air or
water
pollution
. Some people may say that economy must be liberated and government should not interfere with corporates. They may be right in saying that but they seem to neglect the fact that ninety per cent of the
pollution
 in the world occurs from human activities so if these harmful behaviours cannot be ceased, the world may be destroyed since all individuals must be more sensitive about caution which has given by animals, plants etc. A good case in point is, if
water
 does not exist in the globe, the economy or other constructions cannot exist. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that the quality of air and
water
 has a critical importance for the universe so all the prevents should be taken about harmful applicants.
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