The following diagrams show how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler work to heat a house. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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Both diagrams below serve the function of heating up a house with a few key differences. In both diagrams, wood pellets are used as a source of fuel. In a pellet stove, the wood pellets are fed into a fuel hopper where it
then
gets burnt in a combustion chamber.
This
causes hot air to be produced which leaves via a combustion fan
as well as
ashes to be made and collected in an
ash
pan and
lastly
, waste gases to leave through an exhaust duct located in the rear panel.
However
, when it comes to a pellet boiler, cold water is pumped into a furnace, simultaneously as the wood pellets are being burnt causing the cold water to heat up and travel in pipes throughout the house, reaching radiators located in various rooms. An
ash
receptacle is
also
present to accumulate the
ash
produced, which serves a similar function to the
ash
pan in a pellet stove,
as well as
the presence of a smoke stack as an outlet for the gasses evolved to exit during the process.
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