In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the household tasks equally. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
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equally and I completely agree that sharing housework eliminates stress and burden from an individual as well as creates a stronger bond between them.
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it would not be a burden on the other. For a Linking Words
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like dropping the child at school, doing the dishes while the other picks the child back from school, and doing groceries, would not stress anyone with anxiety, depression, and health issues which could affect Use synonyms
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eliminate health problems, it even creates understanding and affection between a couple. When Use synonyms
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and even bring livelihood among them. I believe, there should not be any discrimination that women only have to do housework, both genders can joyfully complete Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite