In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the household tasks equally. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in
this
modern era, we find women in higher positions of jobs
such
as CEO or executive of a company, managers, team leaders, and many more.
Therefore
, in many cooperative sectors, both men and women
work
full time which makes them a deficit of time at
home
. Is it possible to be productive every day at
work
despite doing all the
household
chores? So, for that, both of them have to share
household
tasks
equally and I completely agree that sharing housework eliminates stress and burden from an individual as well as creates a stronger bond between them. After working for a full day, a
person
usually gets exhausted and would like to relax at
home
but gets stressed out if he/she continues to
work
again at
home
. So, if a partner shares a piece of
work
then
it would not be a burden on the other. For a
person
to be productive, and enthusiastic at
work
, one should have a free mind.
For instance
, if a partner shares equal
work
like dropping the child at school, doing the dishes while the other picks the child back from school, and doing groceries, would not stress anyone with anxiety, depression, and health issues which could affect
work
performance. Though sharing
household
tasks
eliminate health problems, it even creates understanding and affection between a couple. When
work
is divided, communication and the well-being of other
also
comes into account, which means when someone cannot do it due to
work
or health appointments the opposite
person
can proactively resolve the issue by communicating and understanding.
For instance
, if a woman got a dental appointment and could not make a meal,
then
a man can proactively cook or can get a takeaway.
This
creates a pleasant atmosphere among a couple and understands that one might be overwhelmed by other
work
. So, completing
household
tasks
unites a family without pressurizing anyone. To conclude, for a full-time working woman, it is best if the couple divides their house chores to remove strain on a
person
and even bring livelihood among them. I believe, there should not be any discrimination that women only have to do housework, both genders can joyfully complete
home
tasks
.
Submitted by fouzia.g14 on

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