Some people believe that universities should only offer places to young students who receive high marks at school. Others think that universities should offer a place to anyone of any age. Discuss and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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a mind
universities
should only admit young students
with maximum cutoff marks
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the good
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tuition
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.
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universities
think that there should be minimum & maximum criteria of marks
eligibility for the admission
in university
of any age because Education
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marks
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universities
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achieve
students
less competition will release more success and opportunities as more demand supply can meet.
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