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Some people believe that universities should only offer places to young students who receive high marks at school. Others think that universities should offer a place to anyone of any age. Discuss and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #universities #offer #places #students #marks #school #place #anyone #age
University
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 is a step away from everyone's career sheet it is as much important for every
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, whatever the age
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,
university
education
 makes you more Explored,
well mannered
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 disciplined & for career orientation. Some people have
mind
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a mind
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 setup that
universities
 should only admit young
students
 with maximum cutoff
marks
 criteria for the final proceeding of
admission
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the readmission
there admission
readmission
 department thinks about
university
 placement
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success
sucess
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success
,
moreover
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 they think that if they give
admission
 to
scolar
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scholar
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 marked
students
 only will lead name fame and brand value of
university
 and value will be increased in Ranking in national and international affairs, some department of Revenue in
university
 thinks about
good
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 placement of
students
 after qualifying degree in multi National group of companies will increase the relations and earning of
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tuition
 fee from future
students
. On
parallel
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 side some
universities
 think that there should be minimum & maximum criteria of
marks
 eligibility for the
admission
 in
university
 of any age because
Education
 Enhancing is right of any student want to study
for example
 a student
have
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marks
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then
scolar
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scholar
 one but have more practical knowledge can have more
sucessful
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successful
 Job in future even these
universities
 not only work for revenue or trp Enhancing they believe that more competition low success to
acheive
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achieve
 between
students
 less competition will release more success and opportunities as more demand supply can meet. A part of my opinion,
universities
who
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 thinks any age or average
marks
 category
students
 should have
chance
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a chance
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 to get
admission
in
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to
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university
 because of high number
students
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of students
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go
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for
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university
 will Encourage
to
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apply
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those
students
 who feel complex to get
admit
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 even more
students
 in
university
 more teachers will be appointed as tutor play vital role in
life
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the life
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 of career building of student, If they have
low
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a low
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 score in previous
Education
, so we should give a chance to
students
 are
Hardworker
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Hard worker
not
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,not
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smart
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a smart
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 worker.
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