A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

Hey jack, It is been a long time
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I
havent
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haven't
heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are
also
doing well. The reason behind writing
this
letter to you
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I am really
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grateful
greatfull
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grateful
to you as you admitted to
take
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care of my house and pet during my absence. As
you
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aware about
my
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hectic job that I work round the clock. Since
,
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I got my
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vacation
vaction
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vacation
approval I was not only anxious
for
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house
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the house
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but
also
more keen
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to
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my dog
tommy
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Tommy
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. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed
upon
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I was chuffed. I will
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on
this
coming 21 Dec to Toronto
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therefore
I want to inform you
some
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of some
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crucial things.Perhaps my cellphone number will not be working
however
,I will available to
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answer
answere
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your
any
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query by mail if any rise. My
tommy
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Tommy
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is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice in
day
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a day
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.
Furthermore
, do not forget to open the switch of
out side
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outside
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light even though,no one is at home. In
morning
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, you will find the newspaper hanging on
door
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the door
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as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep
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it inside
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. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys
of
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my house from my
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neighbour
neighour
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neighbour
. Looking forward to your reply MISBAHA
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