A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

#friend #house #pet #holiday #contact #instructions #care #household #duties

Hey jack, It is been a long time since I haven’t heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are

also

doing well. The reason behind writing

this

letter to you is that I am really

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grateful

greatful

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grateful

to you as you admitted to taking care of my house and pet during my absence. As

you

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areyou

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aware about

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hectic job that I work round the clock. Since

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I got my vacation approval I was not only anxious about the house but

also

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keener

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my dog Tommy. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed

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I was chuffed. I will be leaving on

this

coming 21 Dec to Toronto

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therefore

I want to inform you of some crucial things.Perhaps my cellphone number will not be working

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,I will available to answer your query by mail if any rise. My Tommy is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice

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a day.

Furthermore

, do not forget to open the switch of

outside

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light even though,no one is at home. In the morning, you will find the newspaper hanging on the door as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep

inside

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it inside

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. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys to my house from my neighbour. Looking forward to your reply MISBAHA

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

240 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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