A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Hey jack, It is been a long time

that

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havent

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haven't

heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are

also

doing well. The reason behind writing

this

letter to you

that

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I am really

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grateful

greatful

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grateful

to you as you admitted to

take

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care of my house and pet during my absence. As

you

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aware about

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hectic job that I work round the clock. Since

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I got my

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vacation

vaction

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vacation

approval I was not only anxious

for

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about

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house

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the house

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but

also

more keen

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my dog

tommy

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Tommy

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. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed

upon

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I was chuffed. I will

leaving

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this

coming 21 Dec to Toronto

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therefore

I want to inform you

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crucial things.Perhaps my cellphone number will not be working

however

,I will available to

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answer

answere

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your

any

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query by mail if any rise. My

tommy

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Tommy

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is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice in

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Furthermore

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light even though,no one is at home. In

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, you will find the newspaper hanging on

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as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep

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. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys

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my house from my neighbour. Looking forward to your reply Best wishes, MISBAHA

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

236 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both views and give opinion

Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

in some countries , students live with their family while studying at a university . In other countries , students attend university in another city . Do you think the advantages of living away from family home while attending outweigh the disadvantages ?

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