In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

In some regions, the average body mass index of its Citizens is on the rise and their state of wellness and agility is reducing.

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essay will discuss that one major cause of

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problem is their poor nutritional habit and the most viable solution is providing awareness on the importance of adequate diet intake as it concerns their

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. On the one hand, excessive weight gain can be caused by so many factors. One major cause of

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the

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overconsumption

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over consumption

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of junk foods which can lead to obesity. The reason for

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is that

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meals

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a high cholesterol level known to be detrimental to

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.

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it's prolong

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intake will cause an abnormal deposition

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various areas of the body which can lead to the manifestation of

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of

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problems associated with excessive weight gain.

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recent research in Nigeria

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has attributed the high incidence of

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diseases in the country to

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over eating

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high cholesterol diet.

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problem can be mitigated if awareness is given

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the benefits of eating a balanced diet.

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is because, once they are well aware of these benefits as it concerns their

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, people will purposely adopt a good feeding pattern.

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,

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issues linked with

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trend will be controlled and

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peoples'

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life expectancy will be increased.

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, in Britain, the improved well-being of its Citizens has been linked to the increased awareness of good feeding brought to their notice. In conclusion,

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inadequate dieting causes a state of

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health

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individuals,

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can be effectively managed by providing an enhanced insight

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healthy.

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, relevant authorities should encourage the sensitisation of its residents, especially on the need to maintain a good and healthy lifestyle.