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Industrial area in the town of Norbiton. Select the information, and report the main features.

The map illustrates a region of industry in Norbiton town
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 and the potential development of the location in the future. It's clear that
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 A new school will be constructed on the east
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 of the town at the end of the
road
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. A sideroad will be stretched to the new playground planned.
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, a New northwestern
road
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 is planned to extend from the central
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 in the middle of the town.
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, another extended
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 from the same central
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 forward to the northern
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, in order to cross the river and
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 extend on both sides.
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, many housing areas will replace the current factories, most of them by
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 of the
road
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. A new
round
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 is planned at the southern crossroads. In the same region where the medical centre is intended to be built on the southeast of the central
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. On the other
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 of the
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, a new shop will be established.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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