Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly nagetive impact on local inhabitants and the environment, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

In recent years, young people have been gradually having an independent lifestyle. They like to discover new horizons which are different from their family.
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, they try to escape from their family to find freedom by renting or sharing a rented house with their
friends
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.
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fact brings both positive and negative advancement to
youngsters
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. In some cases,
teenagers
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become more mature when they leave
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the arm of their parents.
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is because they do not have anyone to depend on, while at home, they are taken care
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by their parents. Of course, being outside their home,
youngsters
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may face
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difficulties.
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, they would be stronger after getting over their obstacles.
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, as long as young people get sick, they have to meet
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by themselves and study how to take care
themselves
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of themselves
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effectively in the future
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of waiting for
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help from their
mother
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.
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, the freedom lifestyle can make
teenagers
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suffer from dishonest guys.
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, they are too young to realize the tricks of the gangsters which make
friends
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with an aim to make advantage of
fame
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and fortune of
friends
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. These bad guys can destroy the future of young people by encouraging
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to be victims of
drug
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, alcohol, and criminals.
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, gangsters can hire
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to sell goods without giving full information about the product. To conclude, leaving
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the family can bring advantages and backwards to
teenagers
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. Obviously, they would scope with difficulties during the early days, but they would get a better future. As far as I am concerned, it is very important to choose
friends
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when
youngsters
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have
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independent lifestyle.

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