Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
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The passion and necessity of buying
cars
is increasing globally for the past thirty years.I certainly agree this
has created a huge traffic
mess ,however
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,
government
can tackle these issues by giving out better options. This
essay will discuss the problems caused by traffic
and the measures government
can do to reduce the impacts.
It is a known fact that most people
travel by their own vehicles these days. This
gives them better convenient
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convenience
however
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,however
this
is creating a
massive Remove the article
apply
traffic
during rush hours. People
often gets
distressed, and they waste more time on Change the verb form
get
road
while travelling to work or school, for Add an article
the road
an
example A person Correct article usage
apply
starts
at work by 8 am Correct pronoun usage
who starts
should
leave home by 6am whereas the actual travel time is just 15 minutes. An average human being is wasting approximately 4 hours per day just to surpass the Correct word choice
and should
traffic
to reach the actual destination. It is vital to find an alternative to solve traffic
issues swiftly.
The government
can organize reliable and cost-effective public transport
options such
as train
or Fix the agreement mistake
trains
bus
so that majority of Fix the agreement mistake
buses
people
would be interested to use. It is important to build a good public transport
network which will encourage people
to use instead
of using their own vehicle, such
as having more stations/stops where there will be less walking distance between places. It is important that everyone should feel that taking public transport
is quite advantageous than
using Change preposition
to
cars
. The government
also
can make awareness about the benefits public
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of public
transport
in schools and organizations. In recent
research conducted by Toronto university Change preposition
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suggest s
that Correct your spelling
suggests
people
using public transport
are on time for work comparing
to the ones using Wrong verb form
compared
own
vehicles.
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their own
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In conclusion
Inconclusion
the usage of Correct your spelling
In conclusion
cars
has created never ending
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never-ending
traffic
problems. The government
should keep expanding their network of public transport
so in future the amount of using
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used
cars
will reduce gradually.Submitted by jumly.mohamed on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite