Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Plenty of people think that all university
students
believe that they
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learn all
subjects
.
On the other hand
, others believe they should learn only those
subjects
that will be useful in the
future
.
However
, I think it is healthy for all
students
and these
subjects
maybe can
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future
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. To give
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, all countries
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in CIS studies all subject, because when they will finish eleventh grade and graduates take an exam on knowledge three mandatory
subjects
it is
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, native language and history.
Furthermore
,
students
should two selected
subjects
and almost graduates choose these
subjects
that accosted with their profession. For
this
reason, a large of people think that necessary all
subjects
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modern
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they are important for all
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of jobs.
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should learn and search a lot of information for knowledge and education about
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all things is important.
For instance
, if I choose chemistry and biology,
i
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must learn these
subjects
and
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skills for them and take an exam
of
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chemistry and biology
and
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others three
subjects
. Others,
on the other hand
, think that it is not necessary to
study
. In my opinion, they say that because they know
them
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future
profession and graduates should
study
the subject they find useful. The best effect of
such
training is much higher than if a person was forced to
study
what he does not like.
For example
, if a person does not want to be a
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mathematician
mathematican
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mathematician
, he does not need to spend a lot of time
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math
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, he’s time
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wasting, the best way,
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is focus
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on something practical and useful for his
future
profession. In conclusion, I want to say that
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to some extent agree with
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opinion. But in my opinion,
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high school
students
need to make that they
study
the
subjects
that they need. But it
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on the country, every
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has
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for
future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
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