Some people say holding sport competitions can cause problems for the host country, other disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In the recent world, thanks to the internet and

wide

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range of mass media, international

sport

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sports

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games

receive huge attention globally.

However

, some people

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that becoming a nation to host those international athletic

events

,

such

as the Olympics and World Cup, means

to be

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involved in numerous issues. On

this

account, I would like to list some supporting examples as well as views against

this

idea and eventually state my thesis that hosting those

sport

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events

brings more benefits than problems. The

first

demerit those who are against

sport

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sports

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competitions raise is the disturbance the

events

causes to citizens' daily lives. Namely, the city

centers

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centres

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could be

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overcrowded

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over crowded

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overcrowded

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and jeopardizes commuters' smooth transportation. A specific example is, at the time of

Tokyo

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the Tokyo

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Olympics 2020, many highways surrounding the metropolitan area

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closed and people had

hard

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a hard

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time accessing

to

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the airport. The

second

drawback is the possibility of

crime

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rate surge brought by numerous inbound unlawful visitors. It is difficult to perfectly control them and may become a threat to citizens' peaceful daily lives.

On the contrary

, the

first

and biggest benefit of holding major sports

games

inside the country is its economical benefit.

For example

,inbounds bring in money to spend, pay

cost

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for

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of

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accommodation

accomodation

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accommodation

, and travel around the nation. Another example is, to prepare for the

games

, construction companies hire many labourers to develop

studiums

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stadiums

and hotels.

In addition

, nationwide mass media can make huge earnings by broadcasting the

games

.

Finally

, seeing top athletes coming to

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or

her

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own country stimulates young students and kids and some of them start their serious pursuits to become one, which helps raise the level of domestic players in a long run. In conclusion, there are both good and bad aspects of hosting sports

events

.

However

, considering

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both, I believe the benefits of doing it

outweighs

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the drawbacks, especially from a longer point of view. It will bring the nation a significant economical advantage, encourage some young generations to become excellent sports players, and help countries'

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infrastructure

inrastructuer

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infrastructure

to be more robust.