Online education and training is becoming increasing popular in business world. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

In the modern world, the number of training classes through
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has been increasing in
business
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environment rapidly. There are significant merits in
this
new method,
however
, there are certain drawbacks
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as well. I would like to compare both and
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state my opinion that the benefits outweigh the demerits. The
first
advantage of
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online is its flexibility. Employees can access
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the training sites from anywhere and anytime.
For example
, even when they are in
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places from
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head quarter
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, they can attend the training session without commuting long hours. As
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, even under
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the recent pandemic, new members of the company could learn jobs remotely. The
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merit is to be able to access
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the highest quality lessons through the internet.
For instance
, in the past, the top educator could train only a limited number of employees at one time,
however
, through the web, they can teach a number of learners at once.
Furthermore
, they can access
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the highest quality
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resources all over the world. These are the major advantages of online lessons.
On the other hand
, there are a few disadvantages as well. The main ones often discussed are lack of interaction between the lecturer and the learner, which results in missing
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understanding of
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needs.
Moreover
, the lack of physical
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may
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in less synergy creation between the learners.
For example
, bonds between colleagues are difficult to be incurred through the internet. All
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, I believe these advantages are easily compensated
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activities separately. In conclusion, I believe the benefits of online learning in work environments
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the disadvantages. The method provides precious flexibility to both lecturers and learners and it
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possibility
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of accessing the top quality resources requiring minimum efforts on both sides.
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