Government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than to support professional sports and art evrnts. Do you agree or disagree ?

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and creative activities

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significantly important to every

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. While partial people

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that the country should just focus on the educational community. Personally, I disagreed

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a large extent and I will explain my thoughts in the paragraphs below. Understandably, there is an ascending trend of developing versatile pupils during their educational stage. To illustrate, nurturing new talents

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always a fundamental step towards specialists since it might

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to build up

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strong basic skills and

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understanding of their future.

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for that could be help to maximise adolescents in multiple skills before they

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the specific course in

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tertiary-level education. Undoubtedly, artists and

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are significantly emphasised in current society.

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attention

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the people in educational institutions in order to receive

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benefits

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the national games

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it might weaken the experienced level of applicants and discontinue their confidence

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performances.

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,

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, as well as lower the performance of international competitions and programs. In conclusion, schooling is taken a large pile of

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of every professional

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initially

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in physical activities and aesthetic objects are the main

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cross-cultural communication. In my opinion, the government should seek

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balance between the two communities for a brighter future.