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Completing university education is thought by some to be best way to get a job.On the other hand,other people think that getting experience and developing soft-skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

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It is believed by many that attending a successful
university
 can guarantee a job.
On the other hand
, others think that developing soft skills and getting extracurricular
experiences
 is the most important thing. I think that I am more in line whit the
second
 way of thinking, even if denying the former is impossible.
Firstly
, attending
university
 is necessary in order to reach some kind of job. In fact,
the
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 bachelor is required as a fundamental and basic characteristic, just to apply for certain positions.
However
, in the present ,reality almost everyone is graduated and the competition has risen in an incredible way.
Hence
, graduation, even in the most prestigious universities is not enough.
For example
, I am actually attending Bocconi
university
, one of the most important economic
university
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 in all of Europe, and I see how my fellow students are obsessed to have something more than others.
Therefore
, people thinking that soft skills and
experiences
 are the most important factors while searching for a job, are actually right. Soft skills collect a lot of qualities
such
 as leadership and relational abilities. Some of them can be learned but others are embedded in our personality since we were children.
Besides
,
experiences
 can be added to our cv more easily. To cite an instance, yesterday I asked my finance professor a question about
this
 topic, and he said that in his scope of work, experience is valued far above a good mark on the bachelor, which ,
however
, was necessary. To sum up,
i
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 think that nowadays a bachelor is a must to have, but most and foremost the priority has to be developing social qualities and trying to add work
experiences
 to the cv.
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