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The environment is changing rapidly because humans are destroying nature to meet their needs. Discuss this cause of environmental change and suggest some solutions for this problem.

#environment #humans #nature #change
In recent years, deforestation, industrialization and bush burning are some of the largest issues
among
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 global land use and it is done due to modernization to meet up with our daily needs.
This
 essay will be discussing the reasons as well as the possible solution for
this
 issue. The main importance for clearing
of
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land and trees is to build
shelter
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, companies
such
 as beverages,
plastic
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that
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can
produces
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 harmful wastes which can be toxic to
human
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.
Also
,industrialization
which
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can cause improper disposal of
wastes
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products
 like chemicals,
for
example
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 if a refinery
deposit
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their
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 waste
products
 in the sea,
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if
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 can lead to
death
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 of aquatic animals which are
good
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 source of food.
In addition
, bush burning is
important
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an important
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 aspect that can cause environmental changes because if not properly monitored, can lead to excessive production of carbon monoxide, a toxic air that can damage the lungs,
destroying
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livestock's
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,
soil
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 which is
use
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 for farming and
also
 soil erosion.
This
 is sometimes done for agricultural or social or economic
purpose
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. Some of the ways to solve these problems are,
firstly
,industries,companies and the public should be enlightened about
proper
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 disposal of
wastes
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 to keep the country and how to recycle their waste
products
 for other uses.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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 should
assigned
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 a particular area for
proper
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 disposal of different
kind
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 of waste
products
 which should be far away from livestock,aquatic animals and humans.
Lastly
, bush burning should be
proper
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 monitored to avoid
cause
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 extreme harm to the surrounding. In conclusion, there will always be deforestation to meet end means but
government
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 should provide
a policies
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policies
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 that can guide appropriate authorities to prevent damage to the environment.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental degradation
  • exploitation
  • conservation
  • sustainable
  • ecosystem
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy
  • recycling
  • alternative transportation
  • afforestation
  • laws and regulations
  • awareness campaigns
  • eco-friendly
  • bio-diverse
  • sustainable development
  • reduce, reuse, recycle
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