You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, • Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention the damage that occurred due to your movement staff
last
weekend, I would like to make a suggestion as well so such
things do not happen again.
I am Ankur and I asked for your service last
week because I was shifting my house from 2424 South Street to 2252 South street. I packed all my stuff in boxes before your team arrived. I did not have a lot of stuff and one of my friends gave me your reference and he said your service is very good.
On this
occasion, however
, I was not happy with your staff at all, due, I believe, negligence of your movement staff. They were doing everything in hurry, they broke my 65-inch LED which was not only very expensive but also
had sentimental value because it was a gift from my parents.
Though I understand you are a growing company and you need more clients but I feel that this
fall could have been avoided if they had a manager on them who can manage them all. I would therefore
like to suggest that you review your teams and make sure every team has a manager who can redirect them.
I will look forward to a positive reply from your side.
Yours faithfully,
AnkurSubmitted by support on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite