The money by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals suggest that the

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disbursement should be spent on public services including schools and hospitals,

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of

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exploration.

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programs can bring enormous achievements,

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agree that the

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should invest in civic

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that benefit us all. The reason why spending on hospitals and schools is

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is that it assists to improve

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living conditions.

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, education is a foundation for the welfare and development of a country.

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, spending on

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system is

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stepping stone for

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and strong

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force.

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, if the

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does not step in to develop healthcare , the medical services will be degraded, which threatens the

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health, and even causes rising dead-toll.

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, in many countries, the

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tends to invest

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money in infrastructure and superior technology,

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will indirectly weaken the medical and educational systems,

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to

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illiteracy and deadly cases due to the lack of medical facilities. The very reason

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those believing that

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programs should be stopped is that it requires

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amount of money.

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, if the

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focus on illusionary

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business, it will have

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impact on the citizen’s benefits.

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means, the

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disbursement becomes exhausted, and the citizen’s living quality will not be guaranteed, resulting in

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rising number of dead-toll every day. Another reason is that the healthcare assistance and the resident’s life will be degraded. As proof, the state budget in Japan has been

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seriously after investing in a fruitless

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project, which means the homeless cannot be provided

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necessities In conclusion, many people argue that

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disbursement should be invested

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vital public services rather than

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exploration. In my opinion,

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agree with the view that

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and healthcare systems should be a priority in

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society, and

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project

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should be limited