You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and - ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. - --- Ask what the prices are and - how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your attention that I am looking to buy some electrical goods from your store. I would like to know the availability of those

items

and how long you can hold those

items

for me. I am looking for an automatic top-load washing machine and a double-door refrigerator. I was wondering if those

items

are right now available at your store if so will you be able to deliver them to my house? I have checked the price of those

items

online but as for the festival season, I know that your store is giving discounts on a number of products so I would like to know what will be the cost for both

items

including taxes. One more thing, I would like to know how long you can hold those

items

for me because I am out of town and I will be home

week. Yours faithfully, Ankur

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161 words

8.50

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