You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and - ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. - --- Ask what the prices are and - how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring to your attention that I am looking to buy some electrical goods from your store. I would like to know the availability of those

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and how long you can hold those

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for me. I am looking for an automatic top-load washing machine and a double-door refrigerator. I was wondering if those

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are right now available at your store if so will you be able to deliver them to my house? I have checked the price of those

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online but as for the festival season, I know that your store is giving discounts on a number of products so I would like to know what will be the cost for both

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including taxes. One more thing, I would like to know how long you can hold those

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for me because I am out of town and I will be home

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week. Yours faithfully, Ankur

supportSat Nov 26 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

161 words

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