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Some people think developing countries should invite large foreign companies to open offices and factories to grow their economies. Others think developing countries should keep the large companies out and develop local companies instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #countries #companies #offices #factories #economies
Whether big
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 should establish sub-office and plants in developing countries seems to be an
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 widespread question
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nowadays. Some people believe that outcomes help in growing local
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, whereas others disagree with that. In my
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opinion
opion
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opinion
, I favour
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the participation of more big
companies
 will lead to more benefits, and government should protect
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business
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businesses
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 in a balanced way as well. The reason for
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 trend that
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outcome
outcomes
 should be banned may involve the recognition of
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 of local
business
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 detrimental in terms of industry and international trade development.
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 tend to be more worries that the appearance of
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 loss of local
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 employees, which is the may human resources as well as providing more productivity to local
business
. Big
companies
 provide better wages and working
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, it is quite common for workers
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 their jobs to foreign
companies
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Adovates
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Advocates
 of more international giants should be welcomed for sub-offices and plants believe that cross-country cooperation will stimulate the
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 and bring more job opportunities. To illustrates, if there were more big giants in one developing country, labours would be more likely to work
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 their hometown rather than going aboard for jobs.
For instance
, Apple has worked with a Chinese assembly plant in China, which provided thousands of job
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vacancies
vancancies
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vacancies
 for local dwellers. In conclusion,
although
 local businesses should
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 in a reasonable way, the advantages
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booming
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 local
economic
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 that
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 by cross-country cooperations are more significant,
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 cooperation
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 to be encouraged and promoted.
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