In many countries today, the eating habit and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some are of the opinion that this had negative effects on their health. What is your opinion? Do you agree or disagree with this idea.
Children
are the torchbearers of tomorrow.They form the foundation of the world in the upcoming era. It is a famous saying "We are what we eat". Food
and lifestyle
are the most important components that determine well being of human beings. Undeniably the eating habit and lifestyle
of this
generation has seen an unprecedented change from that of before. There is a divide over the issue that whether this
change is positive or negative. In the subsequent ,paragraphs the two-point of view will be elucidated .
The lifestyle
and eating habits today have changed a lot. Most of the change has not been appreciation worthy. The life of people have become increasingly busy and as ,
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apply
result
the amount of physical activity has reduced. Correct article usage
a result
Also
since there is the
crunch of time and people are living away in nuclear families lot of junk Correct article usage
a
food
has become a preference for the youth.With both parents working the children
are often left with junk food
or cook-made food
. This
can be seen from the example that 78% of youth today are overweight and suffer from obesity. Children
are also
suffering from several lifestyle
diseases
Technology has also
revolutionized the food
industry and apps like zomato,swiggy offer easy delivery of food
at home hence
the overall health of children
is deteriorating.The screen time of children
has also
increased and children
spend their time on electronic gadgets instead
of the field as a result
the physical development of children
is hindered . This
can be illustrated by the Science Research news which states only 33%Change preposition
of
children
are physically active as opposed to 88% a decade ago
To hammer the last
nail, I would like to conclude that overall food
habits and lifestyle
has
affected the health of Correct subject-verb agreement
have
children
for the worst and has
resulted in major negative outcomesCorrect subject-verb agreement
have
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