In many countries today, the eating habit and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some are of the opinion that this had negative effects on their health. What is your opinion? Do you agree or disagree with this idea.

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are the torchbearers of tomorrow.They form the foundation of the world in the upcoming era. It is a famous saying "We are what we eat".

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and

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are the most important components that determine well being of human beings. Undeniably the eating habit and

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generation has seen an unprecedented change from that of before. There is a divide over the issue that whether

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change is positive or negative. In the subsequent ,paragraphs the two-point of view will be elucidated . The

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and eating habits today have changed a lot. Most of the change has not been appreciation worthy. The life of people have become increasingly busy and as

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the amount of physical activity has reduced.

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crunch of time and people are living away in nuclear families lot of junk

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has become a preference for the youth.With both parents working the

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are often left with junk

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or cook-made

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can be seen from the example that 78% of youth today are overweight and suffer from obesity.

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suffering from several

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diseases Technology has

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revolutionized the

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industry and apps like zomato,swiggy offer easy delivery of

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at home

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the overall health of

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is deteriorating.The screen time of

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increased and

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spend their time on electronic gadgets

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of the field

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the physical development of

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is hindered .

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can be illustrated by the Science Research news which states only 33%

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are physically active as opposed to 88% a decade ago To hammer the

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nail, I would like to conclude that overall

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habits and

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affected the health of

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for the worst and

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resulted in major negative outcomes