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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In
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 day and age, it is true that the income of celebrity figures including movie stars, singers and sports celebrities
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 dramatically higher than governors and public servants.
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 essay will analyze the possible reason for
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 trend, using examples from Nike company and Oxford University to demonstrate points and prove
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why
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 is a negative development. On the one hand, there are numerous factors contributing to
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 situation. The major one is that the potential business value of famous stars is huge and
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 value can be reflected
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 their wages. In
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 consumeristic
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, they could generate a large amount of profit for companies through attending commercial events including celebrity endorsements.
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, Recent annual financial reports of the Nike company
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 that only in the field of basketball
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equipment
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, the endorsements by famous NBA stars including
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Lebron
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 James and Kevin Durant have contributed over 1.5 billion dollars
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in revenues
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 over the
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 5 years.
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contrast,
politicians
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 may not have
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 influence,
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 failing to bring about
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 benefits in
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area
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.
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, it is conclusively clear that
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 cannot earn as much as celebrities can due to the disparity of contributions to the business.
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,
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 tendency is negative owing to its two adverse impacts on
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. One of the indicators is that celebrities' high earnings are likely to court media publicity regarding their extravagant lifestyles, which would set a bad example
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 the young generation. It is common that some famous internet-based video uploaders, who have earned
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money,
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 off their luxury cars and lavish goods they use on the internet. While most young adults would be influenced adversely.
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, an intensive study By Oxford University indicates that over 60% of British teenagers under 16
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 that they tend to prefer being a Youtuber to other jobs. Another factor is that
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's attention to politics may be reduced. With
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 increasing number of
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divert
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 their attention to famous individuals rather than
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, there will be
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supervisions
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to
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 the authorities and their decisions toward
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.
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, political professionals could fail to finish their tasks effectively and social problems might not be solved
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 a timely manner due to the lack of
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on
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 governments. In conclusion, famous
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 can earn much higher than
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 due to the fact they can generate huge revenue for
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companies.
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,
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 trend is
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detrimental
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detrimental
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society
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 as it affects young
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 badly and
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people
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's focus from politics.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endorsements
  • revenue streams
  • global presence
  • diversified branding
  • income sources
  • free-market principles
  • market value
  • government budgets
  • public funds
  • public perception
  • value generation
  • bureaucratic
  • consumer spending
  • economic implications
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