You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource, while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Fresh

water

is becoming a scarce resource across the

world

due to

the increase in population and urbanisation. It is frequently argued that the supply

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fresh

water

should be curbed by implementing policies and strategies by

governments

.

However

, certain

people

believe that it should not be controlled.

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essay will discuss both these points of view and

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my opinion. First off,

governments

should implement strategies to

control

the supply of fresh

water

like increasing the tax, price or

limit supplying

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limiting the supply

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of

water

.

This

would help countries to reduce

wastages

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wastage

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and

people

with unlimited

water

supply might

undertstand

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understand

the importance of

water

due to

this

control

.

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, almost 40% of the

fresh

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freshwater

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water

are

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used for livestock farming and large

corporations

.

Therefore

,

general

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public

tend

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to have less

water

for their day-to-day lives.

Further

, when

governments

start to

control

the

water

, it may create a monopoly situation all over the

world

. Certain political parties may exploit

this

opportunity to rule the country for

a

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foreseeable future.

On the other hand

, when

the

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fresh

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freshwater

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water

is not controlled by the

governments

,large amounts of

water

could be wasted. Generally,

people

will not understand the importance of essential resources when they are in

abudanance

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abundance

.

Therefore

,

this

would lead to

water

shortage in

few

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a few

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decades across the

world

.

For instance

,

general

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public and

corporations

may use

water

without a limit and certain parts of the

world

is

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becoming

as

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a waste or dry land. Those lands cannot be used to grow plants or trees.

This

may lead to food

shortage

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shortages

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in the long run. In my opinion, fresh

water

should be controlled

to

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certain

corporations

and

large scale

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livestock farmers who waste huge amounts of

water

for their production process . Recent studies revealed that if the amounts of

water

used by these large companies are controlled, it may save 40% of fresh

water

every year.

Therefore

, It is important to impose

control

on

people

or

corporations

responsible for the wastage.

To conclude

,

water

wastage is high all over the

world

, it could be controlled by enforcing tight controls on

people

and companies responsible for large

water

wastage since when the

water

is not controlled,

people

will not understand the importance of the natural resource and it may

be come

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become

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inaccessible for many

people

around the

world

.