You recently bought some food at a supermarket, but, when you got home, you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, explain what happened to you Give details of the day and time of the purchase ask the manager what he/she intends to do about your experience.

Dear sir/Madam, I am writing you
this
letter to formally lay a complaint regarding a pack of 5kg of frozen chicken I purchased at your supermarket. I bought the said item yesterday at about 4pm while on my way home. After having a hectic day at work, I was looking forward to treating myself to a
well prepared
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chicken meal. On reaching home,
however
, I found out that the meat had decayed probably due to poor storage
condition
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.
This
was an awful experience for me I am sure you can relate to the level of disappointment I felt
last
night not to mention the money spent on the product. I would like to hear from you
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you intend to do about my experience. Will I get a refund or get a replacement? I hope you will get across to me regarding your decision soonest. Yours faithfully, Iorwuese Harry Guusu
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