You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Use specific details and examples to support your answer. Write at least 250 words.

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Due to the increasing population all over the world,

people

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are moving to villages to live. It is often argued that new houses should not be built in villages for many reasons. I completely disagree with

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assertion, house is a basic essential need of

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they

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and they

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should be able to live in any location.

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of all,

humans

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cannot only live in urban

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due to

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the high

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cost of living and

pollution

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.Most

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are expensive to live

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since

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high demand for basic needs

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as shelter, food and healthcare.

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, London is

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one of the most expensive

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in the world,

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many

people

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tend to live in

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the suburbs

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of London and visit London for their employment.

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cities

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have high

pollution

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when compared with

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countryside

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the countryside

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, Delhi has the highest air

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in the world.

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population.

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people

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should be allowed to live in

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countryside

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as it is not practical to live in

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anymore.

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humans

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have an opportunity to connect with nature when they live in remote

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. Nowadays

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want to live in remote

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as they create a peaceful environment among

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, IT professionals are moving to

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areas

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en masse and shifting their jobs from IT to agriculture. They believe that they may have a peaceful life in remote

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while

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themselves with nature.

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, remote

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have less

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and fresh water,

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may enhance

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healthy

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healthy

lifestyle of the

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. Recent studies

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that

people

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feel less stressful and tensed when they live in remote

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living

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additional benefits to

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humans

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people

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should live without harming wildlife and

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nature. In conclusion,

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can live in

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countryside

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since everyone cannot live in

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due to

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and

high

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the high

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cost of living.

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, living in remote

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provide

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many benefits

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peaceful

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a peaceful

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life ,

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healthy

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and healthly

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healthly

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healthy

lifestyle.

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people

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should learn to live in

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countryside

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the countryside

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without affecting wildlife and other

habitants

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habitats

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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342 words

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