Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

The figure illustrates how relatives from the same nation spent their income of one week, in a couple of years which are 1968 and 2018. It's clear that the food percentage has massively dropped in 2018 than it was before. In large contrast to that, the spending on leisure aspect increased a lot by 2018 to exceed 20% of the weekly income. In detail, Housing spending jumped from 10% to nearly 20% by 2018.
In addition
to the transport partition which increased
also
but with a fewer variation to be just below 15%. Moving on to the decreasing fields, which the food
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them by falling from the highest representation of 35%, to settle at a little above 15% in 2018.
Whereas
, in the same period, The spending on fuel and power, personal goods clothing and footwear decreased with a lower ratio.
However
, Household goods remained stable with the same percentage of about 7.5% of the weekly income.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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