People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays people began to
use
credit
cards
to make monthly purchases. In my opinion,
advantages
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outweigh
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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, and I will describe
advantages
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the advantages
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and
disadvantages
for
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credit
cards
.
To begin
with
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the main advantage of the
credit
limit is its renewability. A loan can be used again and again, take money from the bank,
then
give it back and borrow again.
Further
, we can don’t
to
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take cash and there is not any risk to stolen our cash. If you are going to buy an expensive thing, but you did not have enough money, you can
use
a
credit
card
and pay with
this
card
. You can
use
not the entire
credit
limit, but only the necessary amount.
For instance
, we had to withdraw a certain amount from the bank, and close the loan with
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. Today we can
to
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apply
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take
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make
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certain of sum money from
credit
card
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cards
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and pay for expensive things.
However
,
disadvantages
enough
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too.
First
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reason there is a commission for receiving
for
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cash on many
credit
cards
, which
increasing
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the cost of a loan.
Second
, not all shopping malls have to pay with a
credit
card
.
Thirdly
, if you can’t pay
for
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credit
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card
, they can be fine for
this
.
For example
, if you used
credit
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a credit
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card
and if you do not pay
in
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time,
then
you will pay with
percent
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per cent
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. But if you
continue
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continually
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ignore
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it, you may be fine. In conclusion,
for
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people who
has
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a high income, can
use
a
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a credit card
credit cards
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credit
cards
. For these people advantages overweigh
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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. As for my opinion, I will not
use
this
card
, because I think it is
bad
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a bad
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habit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cashless transactions
  • Financial footprint
  • Interest rates
  • Credit score
  • Consumerism
  • Debt accumulation
  • Expenditure tracking
  • Fraudulent activities
  • Overspending
  • Purchase protection
  • Revolving credit
  • Creditworthiness
  • Impulse buying
  • Secured credit card
  • Unsecured credit card
  • Spending limit
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