The information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

The line graph shows the
number
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of Britians and
Americans
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who spent how much money on
fuel
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during the same period. Overall, there is a minimal downward trend for the British people, whereas there is a significant downward trend for the UK people.
To begin
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with, the
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of the poorest and middle-income British people who had expenditure on
fuel
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dramatically increased to over 2% and 3% respectively in their incomes. While the
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of poverty
Americans
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reached a peak of over 5% and
then
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dropped to under 5%.
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, the
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of middle-income
Americans
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decreased to under 4% of spending on
fuel
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in the same period.
In addition
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, Both the
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of the richest
Americans
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and Britians were reducing their use of
fuel
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, at over 3% and over 2% respectively.
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, the percentage of the loaded Britain's who experienced at peak just around 3-4% of using
fuel
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in their expenditure.

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