Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home,leisure, and work activities. Do the advantages of information technology outweigh the drawbacks?
The rapid pace of
the
world development contributes to the creation of different Correct article usage
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technologies
which are commonly used by the population in various spheres of its life. However
, there is a question If modern technologies
have more benefits than disadvantages. Let's speculate on this
topic.
On the one hand, it is generally agreed that information
technologies
may have a positive impact on people
's lives. Firstly
, it manifests in work or study, instead
of writing by hand and spending a lot of time
on it, with the advent of computers there is the possibility of typing in computer programs such
as Microsoft Word, which makes work much easier. Secondly
, with the introduction of new information
technology
, it is now possible to spend your leisure time
in different ways, for example
playing computer games with friends, watching films from the comfort of your own home. As a result
, people
can always find something to entertain themselves at home, regardless of the weather conditions, financial possibilities or surroundings. In addition
, new technologies
allow you to manage the house with ease and do household chores more quickly. For example
, it has become possible to switch on the vacuum cleaner via a mobile app,
and to open the house door for guests through a phone that shows a video image of the person ringing the intercom. Remove the comma
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As a result
, a person has the opportunity to do several things at once.
On the other hand
, the ubiquitous creation and use of technology
has
a number of drawbacks. Whereas Change the verb form
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people
used to meet their friends and communicate with them in real life, they now use mobile phones and social media to find out about their friends. In other words
, information
technology
is replacing live communication between people
, leading to an anti-social, closed life. Moreover
, young people
, adolescents
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and adolescents
time
on computers or with
smartphones, so they spend less Change preposition
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time
outdoors, more
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and more
such
as scoliosis, visual
impairment, which in general negatively Correct word choice
and visual
affects
their physical development.
In conclusion, Correct subject-verb agreement
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although
there are some disadvantages of information
technology
these days, the benefits of using it to keep in touch with people
, to expedite work and domestic tasks are still prevalent.Submitted by mariyanice001 on
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