In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern times, everything is changing and marriage is one of them. These days merger is about sharing
of
responsibility equally between spouses to run a family together. I completely agree with the notion because expenses will be shared and trust will be more.
To commence with, Change preposition
apply
wedding
might be successful when couples equally share everything and don't put Add an article
the wedding
a wedding
burden
on one partner alone. To explain, Add an article
the burden
a burden
family
can be run with both partners and they have to be invested equally. Add an article
the family
a family
Husband
can't be the one taking care of the family single hand and Correct article usage
The husband
wife
isn't sharing a single penny for the family. Correct article usage
the wife
For example
, a group of students from Stanford University published the report that 72% of men'
are running the family and doing all the expenses. Correct your spelling
men
As a result
, both should invest same
amount of money.
To add more, trust and Change the article
the same
bond
in the relationship will get stronger. Fix the agreement mistake
bonds
In other words
, mutual understanding and compatibility of the couples may increase in such
a way that they can believe in each other for every work. This
way decision making
will be easy for them and they can keep personal goals aside and family will come Add a hyphen
decision-making
first
. Add an article
A relationship
The relationship
Relationship
should work parallelly and supportingly. To conclude, discuss with Fix the agreement mistake
Relationships
partner
before taking any decision.
To sum up, I am agreeing with the statement to share the Correct pronoun usage
your partner
Correct your spelling
responsibility
responsibilty
in each and every aspect of the work for the smooth functioning of marriage and family.Correct your spelling
responsibility
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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