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Some people believe that telephone is the greatest invention of the last century. To what extent do you agree?

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smart devices, are extremely
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approximately half of the population resides away from their homeplace. Thanks to
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phones
, we can easily socialize by sending photos or messages .
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distance was extremely important,
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 of workers had to work from home,
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 telephones helped them to accomplish wisely their
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 and goals.employees did not have to commute to work
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 and be afraid of
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 because they efficiently communicate with the condition of their device to be connected to the internet.
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 people to spend their leisure time outside. Owing to the apps that can be found
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 the telephone,
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 or online games, people do not need to stay home,
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 getting more
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pleasurable
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. In conclusion,
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,
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 world, where
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people
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people
 prefer socializing online rather than face to face,
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 believe that it is one of the most crucial
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