You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to ask you some questions about the mountain tour
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going to be held in a few weeks.
To begin
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with, it was my dream to be able to travel and explore the most beautiful places in the world. Everyone in my surroundings has already experienced
such
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feelings and I
also
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want to, but I am not sure that I have enough endurance to make up my mind. Unfortunately, I am suffering from obesity and I can not walk more than 40 minutes without a stop. That bothers me and I would like to ask you if there is an opportunity to have a trip for people with
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health status?
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, I would appreciate
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you share some sources with me where I could find all the necessary answers including information about the date of
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tour and how much will it costs. I would be happy if you consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Eva Tritenko
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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