Most
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the Correct article usage
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young people are leaving their
homeFix the agreement mistake
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from
because of
or work in cities. In my
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believe that
initiative can bring about more problems for a person
compareChange the form of the verb
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to any advantages it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic
of moving away from
for
or work.
of all,
all Correct determiner usage
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most of the villagers are dependent on agriculture. All most all the youths are seen to be unemployed despite being educated because there are no job opportunities in the
.
,the cities have all kinds of facilities. Big mills,factories trades and workplaces to easy get a quality job easily. Can it is easy to become
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in cities
.Change the punctuation
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schools are
are limited to
secondaryCorrect article usage
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level.Many young students drop out of education due to
lackCorrect article usage
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of facilities after passing the secondary examination. But the education system in the city is very good, they do not face
face Remove the redundancy
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any
problemFix the agreement mistake
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.
, most of the youth are leaving their locality and moving to the city to make themselves skilled and established.
, despite the advantages above,
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think young people are facing some serious
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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to
leaveChange the verb form
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on
.
, urban life is very messy
the trend of politics is very high there,many younger join political parties when they get better,
lifeCorrect word choice
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is ruined by corruption and bribery while doing politics.
, leaving their local, family and friends they feel lonely in a completely new environment. Being socially
backwardChange the spelling
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moral is lost.Life is ruined by falling into chaos.
,
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grew up in
villageCorrect article usage
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but now
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am in town to do IELTS. I feel
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very lonely,
becauseCorrect word choice
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of
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am not
concentrateWrong verb form
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myChange preposition
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.
To conclude
iChange the capitalization
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think politics is a bad influence and a result of being socially isolated
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forCorrect your spelling
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outweighCorrect subject-verb agreement
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any of the minor benefits that could result from moving
to
cityCorrect article usage
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for
or work.