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Summer company the sponsor a sport and sport the star as a way to advertise them self summer people think that it is good while other think that there are disadvantages do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages

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Many companies sponsor
sports
 teams and
players
 to display their products. a fair amount of the public believes that it is effective whereas others do not favour
this
 statement. despite some implications of
this
 trend ,I reckon that the pros have an edge over the cons. One of the main advantages is that
players
 get access to equipment which
otherwise
 seems costly as they came from different
states
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 families namely rich or poor.when companies sponsor cricket
sports
 events,they have to pay money to organisers which
are
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 usually used to purchase certain items
such
 as safety gear,bats and balls.
consequently
 ,
players
 are free from financial worries .along with it, their performance will be good in the match because they do not have any burden on their minds.
Besides
this
 ,using
sports
 stars in commercials helps to increase the sale of the
company
 .owing to
this
, the
company
's name gets linked to the name of the player which they use to advertise their commodity .
company
's gadget is displayed by the
sports
 player by which the public get influenced and they will buy that item from the market which is advertised in the broadcasting by their favourite player .
as a result
 ,marketing of
company
 upsurges suddenly and simultaneously their profit margin will
also
 increase.
In contrast
, some companies produce material which is bad for health products like Tobacco products and Alcohol .using
sports
 stars to promote these items among the public is not favourable at all.
this
 is due to the fact that these commodities have an adverse effect on the health of people. To conclude ,
although
 there are fewer disadvantages of using
sports
players
 to promote the
company
's items,I firmly believe that ads play a crucial role in the life of
sports
 stars and there are a lot more advantages of manufacturer sponsoring events which cannot be ignored.
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