You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the stay in your

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. I booked your

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last

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week for five days and I was there for an official purpose. As you know the climate was extremely cold

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year, and the heating system arranged at your

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was found to be mediocre. It is designed to use for normal climate conditions, and I could not cope with the freezing cold of

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winter. To overcome

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situation, I ordered an extra blanket, but it was of no use. It was a sleepless night and it affected my performance during the meeting with the higher-ups. So on the very

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I moved to another

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where I stayed the rest of the days. Perhaps it would be useful to install a state-of-the-art heating system that can cope with the utmost weather conditions. On top of that, it will be highly appreciable if you could compensate me for my loss with a refund or gift vouchers. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Tony M Nidhiry.

ammuj93Mon Nov 28 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

184 words

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