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Some believe that teenagers experiences most happiness moments in their life while others believe that adults experience more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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happiest
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happier in
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 while others, including me, believe that despite being responsible for more issues in adulthood,
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people
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teenager
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teenager
 may feel like a free time in
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experiences
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experiences
life
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, most young
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people
 in their teens lack the maturity to fully understand the
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consequences
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consequences
 of their actions which may lead to a
life
 of regrets.
For example
, most mums who got pregnant below 19 years of age, confess
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the vulnerability they had when they indulged in unprotected sex that resulted
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 unwanted
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pregnancy
pregnacy
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pregnancy
 and altered their lives permanently.
In addition
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19 year olds
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are vulnerable to peer
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pressure
presure
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pressure
 and
seldomly
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seldom
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decisions
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decisions
. They tend to choose based on their peers and social circles and
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On the other hand
, adults make choices mostly based on their individual circumstances. In the event that
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understanding
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grown ups
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 are resilient and can easily bounce back and still
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experience
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eventually
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eventually
 choose new partners in
life
. To conclude,
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people
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 are happier when older than in their
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despite
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despite
 the duties we have in adulthood.
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