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The self-driving cars are getting popular in the world. Do you agree or disagree?

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The auto-driving services are becoming one of the most preferable types of transactions on our planet. I think the kind of automates are cheaper and better. In
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essay I will discuss
this
 viewpoint in a depth. Nowadays we are living in a world where technology is well developed, so it creates the perfect conditions for
people
’s lifestyles too. Every day in the morning, after leaving our house we try to catch a taxi to reach our destination in a short period of
time
 or we drive our cars by ourselves. There could be situations when
people
 are in a hurry and they are not able to find the taxi at the right
time
 and on the other side the taxi service might cost too expensive. So at that
time
 and it is at times like these that we need self-driving machines. The best part is that they are available at any
time
 and work without interruption.
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, in Japan,
this
 type of transport is popular, because of the development of
this
 arena.
People
 are able to get to their position without any problems and almost no one has so far declared negative about these machines. Some
people
 are partially unhappy with
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 because they have some difficulties with the participation of car drivers. They think it's dangerous when you trust your life to a robot and at that
time
 no one guarantees the safety inside the machine. Maybe sometimes the robot will get out of control and of ,course some
people
 don't want to take risks. To conclude, we are living in the technology era, which means we should agree with our modern position and use it as well as we can.
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