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Travelling in a group with a tour guide is the best way to travel Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no doubt that these days tourism has become more widespread. the question is, is it better to travel with a
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guide
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 and
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 or as an individual? In
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 essay, I am going to discuss whether the idea of travelling in a
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 is the best way to travel. In terms of disadvantages, being alone on a trip will give you much more freedom. The main reason given to support
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 claim is that travelling in a
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 will prevent you from making your own plans as you have to follow the
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. To illustrate, if you are not a morning person and you have to wake up early to keep up with the
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 could ruin your day.
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, just being with a
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 and in constant interaction with people can be a bad decision.
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, while a lot of people do not prefer travelling with a
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, it could be the best way to travel.
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,
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 of spending time planning and scheduling your trip, the
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guide
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 can do all the effort.
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, it will prevent you from feeling lost and falling prey to tourist schemes.
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, travelling with a
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 will allow
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you to know more places and the
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 and worn you from local places and ways to scam tourists.
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, you will save plenty of money because the
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guide
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 usually has connections with local people and that will give you a better experience as well. In conclusion, both ways can provide a good trip and enjoyable time for you, but in the
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 it totally depends on the person's preferences.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational
  • logistics
  • convenience
  • exclusive experiences
  • safety and security
  • spontaneous adventures
  • historical sites
  • cultural practices
  • landmarks
  • insights
  • socialization
  • lifelong friendships
  • restrictive
  • authentic experiences
  • skip-the-line
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