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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations
Bad
life
 experiences can occur in
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life
,
time
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 to time. Some
people
 support the idea of accepting
life
 as it is, while
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others think that
people
 should try to defeat bad situations.
People
 can face severe problems in
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life
,
such
 as
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 problems and unpromoted jobs.
However
, sometimes the true policy is accepting the bad
situation
 and living your
life
 peacefully.
For instance
, after the pandemic, many countries struggled with
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inflation, which increased hard
conditions
 to have a decent
life
. In that
situation
, even if
people
 had
an
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unsatisfactory
job
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,
people
 had money to provide
their
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 essential
life
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 expenses. They had a chance to deal with the
situation
. In spite of working in an unwanted vocation,
people
 can easily accept the
situation
 and live their
life
 smoothly.
On the other hand
, accepting a bad
situation
 which you don't want to be in may cause depression. Science proved that, if
people
are
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live
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 under tough
conditions
, their well-being will be affected in a bad way. Having said that, others who believe that
people
 must try to improve their situations have
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right
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.
For example
, if someone works in a low-pay and doesn't have fun while working, they can start to think about giving up.
People
 must believe that they can overcome hard
conditions
,
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 if they keep up trying. From my point of view,
people
 shouldn't stop trying for their
life
.
Life
 has
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difficulties
difficulities
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difficulties
 in every aspect, but if we try to improve our
life
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conditions
, we can have a more meaningful
life
. In conclusion,
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both opinions have strong points to offer.
People
 must consider both opinions and decide which one is suitable for their personality.
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  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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