Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

In recent years, some

people

argue that the increasing prevalence of violent

contents

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on

TV

and computer

games

has a devastating impact on

society

while others contend that those affect the way

people

think and behave. In my perspective,

this

tendency both

adversely

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damages and influences individuals and

whole

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society

. There are multiple ways in which the popularity of violence nowadays há an adverse effect on

society

.

First

and foremost,

this

trend results in higher levels of

crime

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cases which pose a dire threat to all the residents.

This

is because

people

are exposed to aggressive

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that often have a big impression on them and lead to their imitation which is a challenge for officers to deal with their actions. Another significant drawback is that the prevalence of violence is equivalent to less compassion, love and caring. Since

people

are usually obsessed and appealed by those

contents

, they tend to become less interested and care about normal things happening around the community and ignore the miserable situations of others.

For example

, when they are walking and watching action movies, they hardly can put down their phone to help someone who has just had an accident on the

roads

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. The increasing trend of aggressive

behaviors

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on

TV

or

games

bring

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many negative impacts on each citizen as well.

Firstly

, the increasing time spent

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watching

TV

programs or playing

games

can lead to multiple mental and physical health problems.

This

could be explained by the fact that those programs are designed and produced with a high level of addiction to satisfy the viewers'

needs

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of

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violence.

For instance

, when

people

are getting addicted to action movies, it would be extremely challenging for them to get rid of

this

tendency which can have an adverse effect on their eyes and minds.

Moreover

,

this

trend could weaken the relationships between

people

since they often allocate a larger amount of time to immerse themselves in

those stuff

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rather than interacting with others. In conclusion, in my

opinion

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there are numerous adverse impacts that the increasing tendency of high levels of violent

contents

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in

TV

programs and computer

games

could have on both individuals and

the

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society

.