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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating and information. State which you consider to be the most effective - comics - Books - radio - television - film - theatre Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiance.

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There are different kinds of media
such
 as comics,
books
, radio,
television
,
film
, and theatre. Out of the six sources, I want to explain the advantages and disadvantages of
books
,
television
, and
film
. I
also
 describe my opinion about how
books
 are the most effective way of
communication
.
Books
 contain firsthand information, so people can communicate with authentic data.
On the other hand
,
books
 are not the fastest way to communicate, so human beings may reach
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message
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messages
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 late.
Television
,
however
, is one of the best ways to communicate because it's a powerful
media
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medium
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 and it usually transfers original news.
On the contrary
, sometimes it can be misleading by spreading fake news. The
film
 is another way of
communication
 which can be very entertaining and people can talk about it for many hours. It
also
 describes real issues in
the
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society. But films may show social bias and may not be impartial. I believe that
books
 are the most useful ways of
communication
 and information. They include the best information from original resources and because
of
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the fact that authors should write the references, everyone can evaluate the authenticity of their statements.
Books
 can deliver the most valuable ,orals by telling stories which can be a topic for people to discuss and it can be really fascinating for readers. Experts can
also
 communicate scientifically through the latest
books
 in the field of their study. In conclusion,
this
 essay summarized some pros and cons of
books
,
television
, and
film
 as different means of
communication
 and I explained my reasons
on
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 how
books
 are the most effective ways of
communication
.
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