The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan

for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the articles published per year, including women and men professors of the UK
university
and the column graph
indicate
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publications sorted by subject in four universities of the UK during a period of six years. The line graph indicates that 2006 witnessed a rise in the number of articles which are written and published by female professors who have worked in UK universities;
however
, the number of papers published and written by male instructors remained steady between 2006 and 2012 despite some fluctuation. The column chart illustrates that Warwick
University
had the largest number of papers submitted and published during the 6-year period in all subjects. In all four universities, the most written subject was humanities, but at Birmingham
University
and
Shelfield
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Sheffield
University
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science was the subject that has been addressed less.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • current layout
  • future development
  • architectural style
  • structural enhancements
  • functional improvements
  • modernization
  • space requirements
  • safety regulations
  • redevelopment
  • capacity
  • aesthetic appeal
  • facilities
  • office space
  • infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • eco-friendly
  • accessibility
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • upgrade
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