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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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These days, big
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cities
citites
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cities
 have to deal with traffic more than even a few years ago and,
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unfortunately
unfortunatly
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unfortunately
, that tendention is rising due to
high
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 demand for new cars. I agree with that and, in my opinion, roads are really
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overcrowded
over-crowded
over crowded
overecrowded
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overcrowded
 in a huge number of countries. By the way, that situation has a range of measures to solve the problem and in
this
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 I will consider them.
To begin
 with, it
is become
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 more usual for humanity to spend 2 or 3 hours
while
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apply
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going to work by car.
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, in some
countries
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 the issue grew so much that sometimes people
forced
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 to leave their cars just because they are late for
a work
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. I believe that the size of that subject will only grow up in the future while it
also
 causes air pollution due to the usage of an enormous amount of
petrolium
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petroleum
. There are some ways that governments should do to avoid traffic difficulties in the future.
First
, the consumption of
electrocars
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electro cars
 becomes more popular among the
planet
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 population.
Nevertheless
, that pleasure is not affordable for everyone. The authorities have to take care in that field and find ways how to decrease prices and promote
this
 invention around the world.
Second
, I believe that imposing higher taxes on fuel and low costs on underground or public bicycles might be helpful as well. By the way, officials need to invest more in advertisements
of
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 public transport to make it more attractive for use. To
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conclude
conlude
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conclude
,
that is
 significantly important to promote new environmental-friendly machines and public vehicles which will help in avoiding traffics and saving nature. Personally,
although
 the number of cars tends to rise more in the future, I hope there will be ways to increase social awareness.
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