Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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These days, big

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cities

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have to deal with traffic more than even a few years ago and,

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unfortunately

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, that tendention is rising due to

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demand for new cars. I agree with that and, in my opinion, roads are really

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in a huge number of countries. By the way, that situation has a range of measures to solve the problem and in

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more usual for humanity to spend 2 or 3 hours

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going to work by car.

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. I believe that the size of that subject will only grow up in the future while it

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causes air pollution due to the usage of an enormous amount of

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. There are some ways that governments should do to avoid traffic difficulties in the future.

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, the consumption of

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population.

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, that pleasure is not affordable for everyone. The authorities have to take care in that field and find ways how to decrease prices and promote

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invention around the world.

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, I believe that imposing higher taxes on fuel and low costs on underground or public bicycles might be helpful as well. By the way, officials need to invest more in advertisements

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public transport to make it more attractive for use. To

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significantly important to promote new environmental-friendly machines and public vehicles which will help in avoiding traffics and saving nature. Personally,

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the number of cars tends to rise more in the future, I hope there will be ways to increase social awareness.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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294 words

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Fully explain your ideas

ome people think that economic growth is the only solution to stop poverty and hunger, while others think that economic growth is damaging the environment and should be stopped immediately. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Now a days many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or an organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of self employment

Some countries invest in specialized sport facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a negative development ?