Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment In your letter you should Ask about his/her health Let him/her know what changes occurred since he/she has been hospitalized

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Farangiz. I am writing to ask about your condition.

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your heart? You are not sad. Nowadays our medicine is developing acceptably.

You do

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not worry. After a few

days

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you get back be (being) palatably. There were many changes at your home since you left. We

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planted

painted

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planned

your favourite room. It is blue. We decorated it with balls and dice for you to come. Mainly I purchase an effective book for you. I hope that you will

delighted

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after you

aware

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of them. Yes, you recover fruitfully and

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satisfactorily

satisfactoryly

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satisfactorily

. I

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will

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look forward to your answer letter. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully

Farangiz

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

112 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

hospitalized
well-being
updates
developments
lighthearted
assistance
gossip
isolated
eagerness
colleagues
well wishes
recuperation
morale
empathy
reassurance

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Write a letter to a colleague who is hospitalized at the moment In your letter you should Ask about his/her health Let him/her know what changes occurred since he/she has been hospitalized

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution

Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Language teacher should concentrate only on giving positive feedback when students do good work rather than on criticizing their bad work. To what extent you agree or disagree?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?