Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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These days
people
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cities
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people
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other countries
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people
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metro cities
atrocities
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who live in countryside
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a
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a future
are migrate
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are migrating
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to
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other
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the student
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students
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of their
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careers
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lifestyle
life style
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lifestyle
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also
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to
the
international students.
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a big
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community's
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people
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so people
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, the government
should also
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to
cities
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as,
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facilities
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and many more. For instance
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should provide international students and migrate
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scholarships
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international students.
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for people
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move
cities
and abroad for their
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government
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apply
facilities
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facility
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